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I was sitting on my bed with my legs tucked up against my body. I had my face buried between my legs sobbing my heart out because I was really worried about him. It scared me the fact that he hadn’t been seen or heard from in the last three months now, just because of that stupid kid called Chris trapping him in his stupid human world where he could never return back ever again!
  You see how much it scares me?
I was trying to tell myself the same thing over, and over, but my brain wouldn’t listen. And the same horrible questions kept repeating themselves to me like they were a broken record on repeat.
  What if Sonic never comes back?
   Is he dead?
  Has he forgotten about me?
  What If . . .What if I never see him again?

So many questions with so many unanswerable answers . . .

I was literally about to go out of my head and go insane until just at that moment . . . something bizarre happened.
   
 With my face still buried like a bird sticking its head into the sand I was all of a sudden blinded by a bright golden light that warmed me up slowly like a low burning fire place. It gradually grew brighter. But I ignored it, thinking it was the sun rising from the distance.
But suddenly, out of complete nowhere and unexpectedly. I felt such a beautiful voice sliver it’s way though my whole body, like a cool seaside draft coming in from an open window. I heard this mysterious voice, and . . . this voice was so seductive. And so, heart-warming. Which a few nanoseconds in time, suddenly struck me that I noticed that this lovely voice was singing to me. I couldn’t help but stop crying and listen to its sexiness. How that relieved me. Making me feel rather hot inside.
 The unknown voice sang on and on, circling around my mind like a merry-go-round. Suddenly, I felt a soft hand touch my rosy cheek. That was warm too. The feel of that unknown touch made me want to touch it back and hold it tight in my hands, wishing away the moment when I’ll have to let go.
     
     That was it.
     I couldn’t help it but look up.

As soon as I gazed up, staring ahead of me, I had to squint because there was so much light that was covering everything around me. Well, just covering everything but me in this yellow shine. The brightness dimmed so I could see who or what it was there . . .
 
 It was Sonic.
 He was in his Super Sonic form and . . . Oh my sweet lord. What a gorgeous singing voice he had.
     
Even though I’ve never heard Sonic sing before, in a way it was such an honour to hear him open his mouth and sing. I was . . . Surprised. That not only did Sonic the hedgehog came back. He . . . he came back to me.

 As soon as I laid eyes on Sonics perfect handsome face, I started to cry again, because he’s finally back . . . back in my arms . . . He made all those horrible questions disappear into the nights starry sky of the full moon, as well making me feel a lot better after all the crying and sobbing of him never coming back which he did but instead he came back to me.
    Ok. I must be dreaming. I mean . . . Sonic . . .
    He never comes to me and . . . Makes me feel right again.

 Atomically without another word, moan, or sigh of relief, or without even thinking. I leaped from my cold, wet bed and hugged Sonic desperately enclosing my arms around his neck tightly so that he wouldn’t go away again. I wanted him to stay. Hugged in my arms forever. Sonic . . . he was all I ever wanted and now, I’ve got him. I can’t believe he’s finally mine. To my relief I felt Sonic's strong arms wrap like rope firmly around me, hugging me back whilst I was crying. I felt his grip tighten harder around my waist as I felt him pull me into him closer so that I was pressed against his warm chest as hard as possible. At the same time, I heard him whisper in my ear.
 “It’s okay I’m here, sweetheart.”
  He called me sweetheart?
He must . . . love me. And I love him. Like I said, he was all I ever wanted. He’s finally mine. And I’m his . . . his forever.
 
 I felt his grip around me squeeze our bodies together as if our bodies were being forcefully pushed together like a magnets grip on one another. And we, Sonic and I, were warm because of his supersonic heat that was blazing off his whole body, we were like new born kittens huddling and cuddling together and never letting go of each other.
I was still uncontrollably crying on Sonic's shoulder, so he loosened his grip on me, pulls away and looks at me. Face to face. My eyes were red and puffy but inside I felt happy and relieved so I couldn’t help but cry my eyes out and look like a total fool in front of the blue hedgehog.
 
 “Why are you crying?” Sonic asked softly putting on his deep, passionate, cute voice.
 Oh god . . . There goes my heart.
 I was drained physically. But I finally found my voice in the end.  

 “Because you scared me. You never came back for three months, I was terrified! I thought — you had forgotten about me . . . I thought you were dead. I thought you’d never come back ever again. I tried to tell myself that, he’s alright, he’s fine . . . but — but I couldn’t help but miss you. I had to scream out your name so that you could hear me from far away — but yeah. Of course. You didn’t hear me . . . did you?”
Sonic's eyes were locked with mine and I could see inside of them that he was missing me too. The blue blur shook his head and gave me a warm beautiful smile that made me feel at home in his warm arms.
 “No I didn’t. But I missed you too Amy Rose. I didn’t realize it until I saw that carved messages on that tree one day back in the human world,”
 “Huh! You saw it!?” I gasped feeling rather embarrassed. I looked away from his gaze trying to hide my face in the darkness behind me as I blushed hard. But it was useless, Sonic placed his hand on my cheek again as he gentle pulled my face back towards his, and surprisingly, he slowly slid his warm hand down my neck, passed my chest until he stopped at my heart. I looked back up at him with a clueless look. Sonic smiled again (his cute-little-boy-like smile that I can’t resist!)
 “I knew from then on that you loved me.” Sonic whispered, his voice was low and deep.  
I placde my hand on his heart so that we were both feeling each others heart beat, I was stunned when I could feel his heart pumping so fast that it made mine do the same.

 But wait a second . . .
 Our hearts are beating together.

The shiny hedgehog carefully slid his over hand down my back and up again so that it felt like he was stroking me. “You feel cold.” Sonic wrapped his arms around my middle again. “Don’t worry Ames, I’ll keep you warm.” he said.
And he did. Sonic kept me really warm and snug. I heated up in his supersonic embrace very quickly. Then I closed my eyes, leaning my ear on his chest pushing it against it.
I love the beating of Sonics heart. The sound . . . it makes me happy to finally get close to him like this and feel him.

 When I opened my eyes I was still in Sonics arms but I was outside in the beautiful night right in front of the full moon that was blazing down on us. Sonic released me, holding both of my hands in his, I felt safe in the hands of this brute. I mean, I knew he would keep me safe from danger and that with him in his supersonic form nothing could could defeat him. Sonic pushed my head up with his two fingers so that I was looking straight at him, he stared back at me. Our eyes were locked and they stayed locked for what felt like hours.
 Soon. . . We were hovering like birds in the sky. I felt light as air as I looked down to see that my feet were off the ground. I’m flying! I felt light as a feather and I could feel the cool night wind blowing on my face. I closed my eyes again, slowly breathing and enjoying the fact that I was levitating in mid air. It was awesome! Just flying in the sky its . . . cool!
     
 Sonic delicately wrapped his arms around me one last time. But before I knew it, Sonic and I were almost both on top of each other. I squeezed onto Sonic while he moved his face closer towards mine.
 “Don’t let go.” The male teenager whispered as his lips were very close to mine now. And I mean very close. I could smell the scent of his breath. Our mouths got closer . . . closer . . . closer. I felt him slowly breathing on my face which made me boil like a hot frying pan.
 “No I won’t, Sonic.”
He grinned happily, that grin turning into a quite, carefree laugh.
Before I could registered what was going to come next. Sonic's lips became locked with mine.
 Oh. My. Gosh.
 Were kissing.
My heart beat now pumped to the extreme, Sonics kiss was rich and powerful. They weren’t just good. They were indescribable. Bold and wild. The hedgehogs kisses made me want more of him. My grip on Sonic got tighter until my fingers were numb. I felt on fire. I didn’t want to let go. I wanted this to last forever; I wanted it to keep on going. We both suddenly pulled away from each other, staring into each others eyes both looking dazzled and amazed. It was as if we were exploring the art of kissing and the stunned look on our faces told us that we found it wonderful.

“I love you.” I smiled happily.  
His green eyes lit up like the green traffic light when I said that.
“I love you too.” Sonic smiled back.
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There is only a few things I have to say about this... This. is. old! Wow! This was the very first SonAmy I ever wrote. This oneshot was the start of writing about Sonic and Amy. At first, I thought I had deleted it, but then thankfully I found it again :D !

This was apart of a SonAmy novel that I was writing at the time called "Amy Rose: True Love." - Yes. Cheesy title. I wrote this back in 2009 :stare: - I stopped writing the novel because non of it made sense. And I was making it up as I went along. I do still have the novel and all it's chapters, but I only keep it now for spares. :) I had to reread this and correct grammar and spelling errors, I was only 13 years old when I composed this._. xD Seeing what I write now I can tell I've improved over the years. :) I just wanted to show you guys this. :aww:
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BluePeach14 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Daaaaaaaaannnnnnggggg even for your FIRST sonamy oneshot this is spectacular!!! Talent is in the works!!
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trollduck2001 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was really sweet
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JustAnotherUser13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Man... That whole time I was waiting for Amy to suddenly wake up (like all those just-a-dream BS stories I seem to find...)
Thanks for not going that route!
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aha! xD
Your welcome. :3 and I'm glad you like it.
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JustAnotherUser13 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Welcome
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Natsumi-Nyan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Paw ahhh!!this is so lovely !!!Llama Emoji 10 (Shy) [V1] Heart Heart Heart 
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :aww:
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scarlina1999 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
that was amazing!!! i really loved it 
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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mjponso Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
If you'd written this at age 13, you're a better writer than me by a long shot.  I tried writing a short story back then, which I never published because it was simply awful.

I could see this was inspired by the events of Sonic X Episode 52, though taken one step further.  Amy's perspective was entirely believable, and I had to wonder whether Sonic was truly that romantic, or if she was just daydreaming it all.
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, 13 years old.. I actually impress myself sometimes. ^-^ Of course, I had to correct a lot of grammar errors and spellings before I uploaded it on dA. Thank you though! I'm glad you liked it. :)
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VespaTheLaika Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Wow that was so awesome and cute !!! You are serously my best SonAmy writer on DeviantART :)
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! That means a lot . :)
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pictureprincess Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
wow!!! First shot huh?....AMAAAZZZIINGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!  That was amazing! And that's sayin something cause usually I can't stand sonic x so to see the chirs comment made my day lol. I love sonamy and the passion was spot on! Keep writing to get even better okay?
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you soo much!! :dance: it means a lot! ^_^
I don't like Chris either I find him so annoying, in my opinion he ruined Sonic X -_-
Because I adored Sonic X and he ruined it! D:
And okay! I will. :) My dream is to be a book author ! :D
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pictureprincess Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I liked Sonic X too I mean that's what kind of got me into Sonic in the first place but when I saw the games I was stuck into the game world better...But  MAAANN CHRIS RUINED EVERYTHING!! I was like u know what! It makes sense now!!! Sonic X was 2005 and  ahuman ruined it! So OF COUSE elise was inspired by Chris Thorndyke! Why else would there be such crap in a sonic show and game?! But that's just my opinion...The Japanese version was spot on though. But 4kids version was like watching Dora the explorer with a splash of action...Even the bad guys were too soft...But enough with that, You should definitely pursue that dream because your details were spot on in your story. Besides some editing and spacing, I think you really got everything down! Are you hoping to do children books or teen books someday?
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mind you I didn't mind Chris in Season 4 where he transported himself back to Sonic's world to help defeat the Medarex and Help Cosmo spread her seeds. He was more mature and less whiny then.. but he still ruined it, to me he looked waaaaaaaaaaaay out of place with Sonic and his gang. You know there's all these awesome hedgehogs and other animals then there's a human. :| (Blank Stare) Kind of ruins the picture.
uuuugh.. Don't get me started on Princess Elise... -_______- She ruined that Sonic game completely. And the game itself was screwed up anyway. I got it on x-box once and uuggh.. never again. What was SEGA thinking when they got Elise to kiss Sonic. I mean, I respect other couples, but seriously, a human kissing a hedgehog?! Lets face facts, a human and an animal cannot be in a sexual relationship, that's just inhumanly impossible. In my opinion it should have been Amy kissing Sonic back to life, that would be soooooo CUTE!!:heart:pikachu Rup cheeks plz Pervy Bubbles And I want to write Teen books :D !
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pictureprincess Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Now see You have great taste! Heck yeah it should have been Amy kissing sonic! Sega know better then that! They must have been on something! And sonic acted more like a babysitter in the game anyways. Another reason I hated it! And yeah I'm sorry but in my opinion if you're going to do a sonic series...base it off the games and leave humans out of it unless absolutely necessary like g.u.n. or something! You do not turn sonic into a Mario by wasting his precious time adventure and speed...on saving a princess. You. Just. Don't. Hence why I don't even read the comic version.
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When I watched that scene I imagined what was going through Amy's mind, something along the lines of "You're not going to do what I think. . . No. OH GOSH! NO! Don't you dare! No! No! No!" xDDDDD Sonic did act like a babysitter to Elise, he baby sited Chris pretty much in the Sonic X series.__. Every scene annoyed me cause all you heard Chris say was "SOOOOONIIICCCC!!!!!" Imagine having that on repeat for ten hours. -_- :irritated:
I totally agree, humans should only get involved in Sonic games if necessary, I mean, Maria Robotnik and Gerald Robotnik I can accept because they have a significance in the show, they were there for a reason. Chris wasn't. It came across to me that Chris was a random idea that someone thought of as a filler. Actually, I've never thought it that way as Sonic being turned into Mario by saving Elise all the time. I don't mind Mario, I used to play Super Mario Brothers on DS and got to World 8 and never completed it. I still play Super Princess Peach. But I prefer Sonic BY FAR! Cutie Love    
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pictureprincess Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
Now see that  PROVES that amy is not an obsessed psycho fan girl. If she was!  SHE'D HAVE BEAT THAT ELISE INTO AN OBLIVION!!!  She was all too concerned for Sonic's safety! and life! She loves that hedgehog. I don't care what any body says! And I agree with you and sympathize with you completely. On your views of humans in Sonic games and your horror experience with the dreaded Sonic 06... lol And yeah I...I can't get into peach unless I really. really. have to. Like SSBB, Olympics, Mario kart, have to. I mean she's awesome and all but...I like hitting ppl with hammers over umbrellas...lol in my opinion
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It does prove that she's not totally obsessed I agree, I think SEGA have toned down her overly bubbly obsession for Sonic through out the games. I WANT SONIC LOST WORLDS THOUGH!!!!!!!!
Just saying. Rainbow La -plz account- Big La. :Dummy La: :hyper: Wheeeeee emote I've been a bit of a spoiler and I've watched one cut scene from that game... It looks soooo awesome! :omglaa: too bad it isn't on X-box :crying:
Anyway, apart from the Elise scenes in Sonic 06 I remember my friend she used to own the game and there were so many glitches that made it difficult to play the game .__. I had glitches in my game too so after a while I took my game back to the shop and said it was broken but apparently it was the same with all the Sonic 06's, many people complained that they were glitches in the game.
I prefer Amy to Peach by far! I find that Amy has more of a personality that Peach does, which makes Peach quite boring._.
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Pewdie-Cry122 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Ily for this!it is perfect!
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha!:XD: Thank you! :happybounce:
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Pewdie-Cry122 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
No problem!
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Psychic2you Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Wow!!!!!

That was your first try?
That's so so so so epic

I'm not even on this level after one year.
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha. Thank you!:D
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Psychic2you Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
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angeldcs6198 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
ummm...at first i thought it was.......wow good end
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Shadamysuperfan9 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
it was just wonderful, so decriptive, i cant believe you were only 13 when you wrote it, its just so cool, so nice, you shoulo really become a writer, write a book, its completely wonderful, please write more, I loved it.
ps: even though Im fan of shadamy i love sonamy too
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you I'm pleased you liked it. :) And actually, that is one of my dreams to become an author! And I am currently writing a book right now, at the moment I'm entertaining my book in a writing program. :)
And its okay! :XD: I love ShadAmy too, but I love SonAmy more! :la: 
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InkStainedGhost Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're going to get published! COOL! i will have to read it as soon as it comes out! :D
I would like to be an author but i don't think i'll ever become professional, but you definitely! :)
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It would be so amazing if one day I made it to the Best-Sellers list. :wow: That's also another dream I've always wanted.
And aww thank you! That means a lot ! :3
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InkStainedGhost Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome! 
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Shadamysuperfan9 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
tell me when you publish you book, I will totally read it :iconbookplz:
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will! :)
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CureHope2000 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
That was your first one? OAO 

Wow. My first story every was just... Bleh. >A> I had terrible vocabulary along with a terrible story, too.
Though I, in fact, also started in 2009, when I was 9 years old. :meow:

Even though you were my age when you wrote this, you're still a lot better! 

But as you always say, practice makes perfect! :iconlawooplz: 
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, practice does make perfect! :la:

And I actually changed some of the vocabulary and all the little pieces because there were lines in there that make no sense at all. I read it and thought, "Did I really write this?" or "What was I thinking when I put that?" :stare: xD

I'm glad you like it though! :aww:
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InkStainedGhost Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this was.... beautiful, just beautiful! i love your style of wrtiting, its so descriptive and you pulled me right into the scene, you are one amazing writer! :D
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Realise-FrenchFries Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
aw Thankk you!! :D
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InkStainedGhost Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome :)
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